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Emergency Ward

Case 1
Pt. with high fever (104°F) with mild back ache and leg pain, admitted in Emergency Ward. Vitals are normal and Pt. shows no other symptoms.

Case 2
Pt. with abdominal pain since 1½ month. Diagnosed with Rheumatoid Arthritis with intestinal lung disease. Pt. has no history of fever and vomiting. Vitals are normal. Pt. has history of Kyphoplasty surgery.
Diagnosis:
  • Systemic Hypertension
  • Kyphoplasty for D12 Compression Fracture
  • Carcinoma Gallbladder (ECOG →)
  • Cystitis
  • Old CVA

Case 3
Back pain, CKD 5th stage, ongoing dialysis, 9-day night pain in gluteal region.
Diagnosed with T2DM / SHTN / Dyslipidemia / Hypothyroidism.
Admitted due to fever, cough, cold, breathlessness.
History of Bowel & Bladder Disorder.

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Date: 05/08/26 — The Content of the Work Performed
Today was the first day of my 2-day posting in the Emergency department of Emergency Medicine. We were introduced to the different zones of the ER — the Green Zone for OPD patients, the Red Zone containing the ICU, the Yellow Zone for the ER ward, and the Black Zone for dead on arrival casualties. We observed patients in the Yellow Zone.
The following cases were observed:
Case 1: A patient presented with high-grade fever (104°F) accompanied by body ache and back pain. Vital signs were stable, and the patient was assessed to determine the underlying cause of fever.
Case 2: A patient presented with abdominal pain and a known history of Rheumatoid Arthritis with Intestinal Lung Disease (ILD). The patient had previously undergone Kyphoplasty and had multiple comorbidities including Systemic Hypertension, Carcinoma Gallbladder (post-CCG), old CVA, and Cystitis.
Case 3: A patient on dialysis with CKD Stage 5 presented with back pain, fever, cough, chills, and breathlessness. The patient also had Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus, Systemic Hypertension, Dyslipidemia, Hypothyroidism, and bowel and bladder dysfunction.
During this posting, we learnt about triage — how patients are evaluated and assigned to a particular zone, and how critical cases are directed to the resuscitation bay based on triage assessment.

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