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📝 Marking: 5AH020 Professionalism Assignment

Student Number: 2422753 | Word Count: 2,200 (slightly over 10% limit of 2,200 — worth flagging)

Learning Outcome 1 (30 pts): Analyse barriers to communication and propose suitable solutions

Criterion 1: Knowledge and Understanding of Communication Barriers

The assignment identifies a strong range of barriers: sensory (deafness), cognitive (learning disability), emotional/behavioural (distress/withdrawal), physiological (pain increasing anxiety), environmental (poor lighting, distractions), and relational (carer power imbalance). The link between these barriers and patient safety is made explicit. Reference is made to RCOSLT (2021), NHS England (2019), NICE (2021), and HCPC (2023).
Strengths: Multi-layered barrier analysis; recognises behaviour as communication; links barriers to safety consequences. Gaps: Limited depth on environmental barriers; RCOSLT (2021) citation isn't fully unpacked; some assertions are broad rather than critically analysed.
Score: 7/10 – Very Good

Criterion 2: Proposed Solutions / Strategies

The assignment proposes pausing the assessment, using visual aids/gestures, adapting the environment, involving the carer appropriately, reassurance techniques, and considering BSL/written communication. References include MCA 2005, HCPC standards, and mention of AAC tools.
Strengths: Solutions are clearly linked back to the identified barriers; person-centred framing throughout; legal grounding of the decision to pause. Gaps: Some solutions are listed rather than critically evaluated — e.g. BSL is mentioned briefly without considering practicalities (interpreter needed?); Makaton/PECS are not mentioned despite relevance for learning disability; Egan's skilled helper model is cited but not deeply applied.
Score: 7/10 – Very Good

Criterion 3: Critical Analysis / Depth

The connection between barriers is explained well (e.g. pain compounding cognitive impairment), and the shift from cooperation to distress is framed as communicative behaviour. However, the analysis stays mostly descriptive at points — solutions are proposed but not always critically weighed against alternatives.
Score: 6/10 – Good
LO1 Subtotal: 20/30

Learning Outcome 2 (30 pts): Demonstrate understanding of ethical principles and application to scenario

Criterion 1: Knowledge of Ethical Principles

All four core principles (autonomy, beneficence, non-maleficence, justice) are addressed. Dignity, consent, and supported decision-making are discussed with reference to MCA 2005. BMA toolkit cited for autonomy. Tensions between principles are acknowledged (e.g. completing assessment vs. respecting withdrawal).
Strengths: Comprehensive coverage; correct identification of ethical tensions; principle of justice linked to Equality Act 2010. Gaps: No reference to Beauchamp & Childress or any academic ethical framework by name; justice is covered via the Equality Act but the broader concept (equitable care) could be developed; contemporary ethical discourse (e.g. relational autonomy, care ethics) is absent.
Score: 7/10 – Very Good

Criterion 2: Application to Scenario

MCA 2005 is correctly applied — the two-stage test is implied, best interests and least restrictive option are mentioned. The carer's role is considered in relation to autonomy. The Equality Act 2010 is applied as a reasonable adjustments duty. Safeguarding is raised as an ethical and professional concern.
Strengths: MCA framework applied accurately and contextually; reasonable adjustments framed ethically and legally; safeguarding linked to vulnerability. Gaps: Consent vs. assent distinction is not explored; the concept of Gillick competence or equivalent adult capacity frameworks could be more explicit; best interests decision process (consulting others, least restrictive) is mentioned but not fully worked through.
Score: 7/10 – Very Good

Criterion 3: Critical Depth on Ethics

The essay recognises the tension between continuing assessment (beneficence/clinical need) and stopping (autonomy/non-maleficence), which shows good ethical reasoning. However, it doesn't critically explore what should happen if capacity is lacking in depth, or consider ethical debates around paternalism vs. supported decision-making more broadly.
Score: 6/10 – Good
LO2 Subtotal: 20/30

Learning Outcome 3 (30 pts): Evaluate legal and professional frameworks

Criterion 1: Knowledge of Legal/Professional Frameworks

MCA 2005, Equality Act 2010, HCPC Standards (2023), NICE NG96, NHS England Safeguarding, and RCOP documentation standards are all cited. Duty of care and scope of practice are addressed. SOAP notes are referenced for documentation.
Strengths: Strong range of frameworks; documentation responsibility handled well; safeguarding duty clearly articulated. Gaps: The Care Act 2014 (relevant to adult safeguarding) is not mentioned; no reference to local safeguarding adults boards or the Mental Health Act (less critical but applicable in distress scenarios); HCPC standards are cited but specific standards (e.g. Standard 2.1 on communication) are not referenced.
Score: 7/10 – Very Good

Criterion 2: Application to Scenario

HCPC standards are applied to the specific clinical actions required (adapting communication, consent, escalation, referral). The Equality Act's reasonable adjustments duty is applied practically. Documentation requirements are linked directly to the scenario events (patient withdrawal, distress, capacity discussion).
Strengths: Frameworks are applied to concrete clinical decisions; escalation and referral pathways mentioned; documentation linked to accountability and legal protection. Gaps: Slightly descriptive at times — could more explicitly evaluate how well these frameworks guide practice rather than just what they require; inter-agency working (e.g. social care, specialist LD services) could be explored.
Score: 7/10 – Very Good

Criterion 3: Critical Evaluation

The essay evaluates the frameworks as guiding safe, equitable, and responsive care. There's a reasonable attempt to link multiple frameworks together. However, the evaluation remains at the level of "these frameworks are important because..." rather than critically examining any limitations, tensions between frameworks, or debates in the literature.
Score: 6/10 – Good
LO3 Subtotal: 20/30

Additional Criteria (10 pts total)

Structure, Organisation, and Clarity (3 pts)

The essay is clearly structured with an introduction, labelled sections (barriers, ethics, legal/professional), and a conclusion. The introduction sets out aims clearly. Some paragraphs are long and could be broken up. Flow is mostly good.
Score: 2/3 – Very Good

Academic Referencing (3 pts)

Harvard referencing is used consistently and a reference list is provided. References are mostly current and relevant (2018–2026). Minor formatting inconsistencies (e.g. no spaces before brackets in in-text citations: "NHSEngland,2019"). Some sources (e.g. RCOSLT 2021) are cited but not in the reference list.
Score: 1.5/3 – Good

Academic Writing / Professionalism (2 pts)

Writing is clear and mostly formal. Some sentences are long and complex. The word count is 2,200, which is at the very top of the ±10% tolerance (maximum is 2,200 words) — this may need checking with the assignment brief.
Score: 1.5/2 – Good

Reflection / Professional Insight (2 pts)

There is implicit reflection throughout (e.g. recognising the carer dynamic, noting the clinician must work within scope). However, there is limited explicit reflective voice — the essay is largely analytical rather than reflective. A brief acknowledgement of personal learning or professional development would strengthen this.
Score: 1/2 – Adequate
Additional Criteria Subtotal: 6/10

🏆 Final Mark Summary

SectionScoreOut of
LO1: Communication Barriers2030
LO2: Ethics2030
LO3: Legal & Professional Frameworks2030
Additional Criteria610
TOTAL66100

Overall Grade: 66% — Very Good


Key Feedback Summary

What works well:
  • Comprehensive identification of barriers with good linkage to patient safety
  • Solid application of MCA 2005 and Equality Act 2010 to the scenario
  • Good range of legal/professional frameworks (HCPC, NICE, safeguarding)
  • Clear, logical structure with a strong introduction
  • Documentation responsibility is a highlight
To improve for higher marks:
  1. Move from description to critical analysis — don't just say what frameworks require, evaluate how well they address the scenario's complexity
  2. Engage with academic ethical theory — reference Beauchamp & Childress, or relational autonomy frameworks
  3. Deepen communication solutions — consider Makaton, PECS, AAC tools more specifically; critically evaluate BSL practicality
  4. Fix referencing — ensure all in-text citations appear in the reference list (RCOSLT 2021 appears missing); add spaces in citations
  5. Add explicit reflection — a sentence or two acknowledging your own professional learning would address the reflective criterion
  6. Word count — double-check the exact count; 2,200 is the maximum permitted

Can you redo it and make it 75 per cent but keep most my assignment the same

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      p('This assignment explores a scenario involving an elderly patient with deafness and a learning disability who becomes distressed during a clinical assessment of a foot/ankle injury. This situation presents dynamic challenges, including communication barriers, ethical tensions between respecting autonomy and beneficence, non-maleficence, and legal considerations surrounding capacity and consent. The aim of this assignment is to critically analyse the barriers to communication present in this scenario and propose appropriate strategies to overcome them, demonstrate an understanding of key ethical principles and their application, and evaluate the application of legal and professional frameworks guiding practice, including the Mental Capacity Act 2005 and standards set by the HCPC. The importance of a flexible, person-centred approach that adapts to the evolving needs of the patient will be emphasised throughout.'),

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      p('In this scenario, communication with the patient is influenced by multiple, overlapping barriers. The patient has a significant sensory barrier — deafness — which limits the effectiveness of verbal communication and requires alternative methods, primarily visual or tactile approaches (Royal College of Speech and Language Therapists [RCOSLT], 2021). The patient also presents with a cognitive barrier associated with the learning disability, which can influence the patient\'s ability to understand, communicate and retain information, especially in a clinical context (NHS England, 2019). Both sensory and cognitive barriers create a complex multimodal communication challenge, where both expressive and receptive communication are impaired.'),
      p('An emotional and behavioural barrier emerges when the patient withdraws their foot and becomes distressed. This may indicate fear, pain, or a lack of understanding of the assessment being performed (NICE, 2021). If pain is a contributing factor, it further reduces the patient\'s capacity to engage, acting as a physiological and communicative barrier by increasing anxiety and reducing trust. Environmental factors within the home setting — such as poor lighting or background distractions — can additionally limit visual communication. Furthermore, the presence of a carer may introduce potential power imbalances or miscommunicated information, which may cause the patient\'s autonomy to be unintentionally overshadowed. These barriers are interlinked and dynamic; the patient\'s shift from initial cooperation to distress demonstrates how behaviour itself functions as a form of communication (HCPC, 2023). Failure to recognise and adapt to these shifts risks compromising patient safety and violates the professional expectations outlined by the HCPC, which emphasises the need for effective communication that meets each service user\'s individual needs (HCPC, 2023).'),
      p('To address these barriers, a flexible and highly individualised communication strategy must be implemented, aligned with legal and professional guidance. Initially, when the patient becomes distressed, the clinician should pause the assessment, recognising this as a potential withdrawal of consent and responding in accordance with the Mental Capacity Act 2005 (MCA) to ensure the patient is not subjected to care without appropriate consent (Department of Health, 2005). Communication should then be adapted using non-verbal strategies, including gestures, facial expressions, and demonstration, alongside visual aids such as pain-scoring scales or body diagrams to support patient understanding. Where appropriate, a qualified British Sign Language (BSL) interpreter should be arranged in advance; it is important to critically acknowledge that ad hoc use of family members or carers as interpreters carries risks around accuracy and confidentiality, and a professional interpreter is preferable where resources allow (RCOSLT, 2021). For patients with learning disabilities, Augmentative and Alternative Communication (AAC) tools — such as Makaton symbols or Picture Exchange Communication System (PECS) cards — may be particularly effective in supporting understanding and reducing anxiety (NHS England, 2019). Simplified written communication may also be appropriate depending on the patient\'s literacy levels.'),
      p('Making environmental adjustments, such as improving lighting and reducing background distractions, can enhance visual engagement. The SOLER and SURETY models can further support effective non-verbal communication where verbal interaction is limited. SOLER (Sit squarely, Open posture, Lean forward, Eye contact, Relax) helps the clinician appear approachable, potentially reducing the patient\'s anxiety and distress (Egan, 2014). Similarly, SURETY (Sit at an angle, Uncross legs/arms, Relax, maintain Eye contact, appropriate Touch and using intuition) promotes trust and equality while encouraging the clinician to remain attuned to the patient\'s emotional responses (Stickley, 2011). NICE guidance highlights the importance of making reasonable adjustments for individuals with learning difficulties to promote understanding and reduce distress (NICE, 2018). The carer should be involved in a carefully managed role — they can help keep the patient calm and support communication — while the clinician must remain vigilant that the patient\'s autonomy is not overshadowed by the carer\'s presence. The assessment should be broken into small, clearly signalled steps with regular pauses, allowing the clinician to evaluate the patient\'s responses and adjust accordingly. This approach ensures care is delivered safely, ethically, and responsively to the patient\'s individual communication needs (RCOP, 2021).'),

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      p('Key ethical principles are essential in guiding professional decision-making given the patient\'s vulnerability and complex communication needs. The Four Principles framework developed by Beauchamp and Childress (2019) — comprising autonomy, beneficence, non-maleficence, and justice — provides a widely used analytical structure for evaluating ethical tensions in clinical practice (UK Clinical Ethics Network [UKCEN], 2013). Applying this framework to the current scenario reveals several intersecting tensions that require careful navigation.'),
      p('Autonomy refers to the patient\'s right to make decisions about their own care (BMA, 2024). In this context, the patient withdrawing their foot must be interpreted as a meaningful expression of choice and potential refusal, even in the absence of verbal communication. It is a cornerstone of ethical and legal practice that non-verbal expressions of distress or withdrawal carry the same weight as verbal refusal. The MCA 2005 reinforces that individuals must be supported to make their own decisions wherever possible, and that disability alone cannot be grounds for assuming incapacity (Department of Health, 2005). However, applying the concept of relational autonomy — which recognises that autonomy is not exercised in isolation but is shaped by relationships, power dynamics, and social context (Mackenzie and Stoljar, 2000) — is particularly valuable here, as the patient\'s capacity to express autonomous choice is directly mediated by their communication barriers and the presence of the carer.'),
      p('Autonomy must be balanced with beneficence — acting in the patient\'s best interests — as further assessment is clinically necessary to identify potential injury, such as fractures, and prevent further harm (theMedicPortal, 2023). NICE guidelines support the need for appropriate assessments and reasonable adjustments to ensure effective care for individuals with learning disabilities (NICE, 2018). Non-maleficence requires the clinician to critically evaluate whether continuing the assessment in the face of distress causes harm; in this case, forcing continuation could cause psychological harm, increase distress, and damage the therapeutic relationship. This represents the core ethical tension: the clinician must balance the clinical imperative to complete the assessment against the moral obligation not to inflict distress. Crucially, these principles are not automatically hierarchical — the clinician must weigh them contextually rather than defaulting to one over another.'),
      p('The principle of justice demands equitable care regardless of disability or communication need. In this scenario, justice requires not only that the patient receives equal access to assessment but that the system makes active reasonable adjustments to enable this. Importantly, justice also encompasses the avoidance of paternalism — making decisions for patients under the guise of best interests when the patient\'s own values have not been adequately explored. The difference between genuine best-interests decision-making under the MCA and paternalistic overriding of patient wishes is subtle but ethically significant, and the clinician must navigate this carefully (NICE, 2020).'),
      p('Dignity is a further ethical principle closely aligned with the HCPC standards and is central to how the clinician should engage with this patient throughout. Maintaining dignity in the face of distress means communicating respect through actions, tone, and body language, even when verbal exchange is not possible (HCPC, 2023).'),

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      p('Several legal and professional frameworks directly govern the clinician\'s conduct in this scenario. The MCA 2005 establishes that capacity must be assessed on a decision-specific and time-specific basis, and that all practicable steps must be taken to support an individual in making their own decisions (Department of Health, 2005). In this scenario, the patient\'s deafness and learning disability must not lead to assumptions of incapacity. Instead, the clinician must adapt communication methods — such as visual aids or Makaton — to maximise understanding before assessing whether the patient can understand, retain, weigh, and communicate a decision regarding the assessment. If the patient does lack capacity for that specific decision, any action taken must be in their best interests and represent the least restrictive option available, with reference to any known wishes, values, and the views of people close to them (Department of Health, 2005).'),
      p('The Equality Act 2010 protects individuals from discrimination based on disability and places a duty on services to make reasonable adjustments to ensure equitable access to care (UK Government, 2010). In this scenario, the patient\'s deafness and learning disability are protected characteristics, meaning the clinician and service provider must adapt their approach accordingly. Failure to make these adjustments can disadvantage the patient and constitute discriminatory practice. This aligns with NICE guidance which emphasises the need for personalised and accessible healthcare for people with learning disabilities (NICE, 2018). While the MCA and Equality Act provide a strong framework, it is worth critically noting that their implementation in practice can be undermined by time pressures, resource constraints, and lack of accessible communication tools in community settings — highlighting a gap between legislative intent and real-world delivery.'),
      p('The Care Act 2014 is also relevant, as it establishes a statutory duty to promote the wellbeing of adults with care and support needs, placing obligations on local authorities and healthcare professionals to work collaboratively to support vulnerable individuals (UK Government, 2014). In this scenario, where the patient has a learning disability and is being cared for at home, the clinician should consider whether onward referral to social care or specialist learning disability services is appropriate, reflecting the Care Act\'s emphasis on integrated, person-centred support.'),
      p('Safeguarding responsibilities must be considered, as the patient may be particularly vulnerable due to age, disability, and communication barriers. Healthcare professionals have a duty to remain alert to signs of abuse, neglect, or unexplained injuries, particularly where a patient may struggle to disclose concerns independently. If the presentation of the injury appears inconsistent, or there are wider concerns about the patient\'s welfare, safeguarding procedures must be followed in line with local policy, the Care Act 2014, and national guidelines (NHS England, 2022). The presence of the carer does not remove the need to assess whether the patient is safe, heard, and free from undue influence; indeed, safeguarding practice must remain person-centred at all times.'),
      p('Professional standards set by the HCPC require practitioners to communicate effectively, obtain valid consent, respect dignity, manage risk, and act in the best interests of patients (HCPC, 2023). These standards apply directly to this situation, requiring the clinician to recognise the patient\'s distress, adapt communication appropriately, and avoid continuing an assessment in a way that may cause harm. A duty of care also requires the professional to work within their scope of practice, recognise limitations, escalate concerns where necessary, and arrange onward referral if the injury cannot be safely assessed within the home environment.'),
      p('Accurate and contemporaneous documentation is another key professional responsibility. Records should include the patient\'s communication needs, reasonable adjustments made, observations of distress, consent discussions, capacity assessment where relevant, clinical findings, and the rationale for all decisions and referrals. Clear documentation — structured using tools such as SOAP notes (Subjective, Objective, Assessment, Plan) — supports continuity of care, demonstrates accountability, and provides legal protection should decisions be reviewed (RCOP, 2021). In this case, documenting that the patient withdrew their foot and became distressed is particularly important, as this may constitute evidence of withdrawal of consent or inability to tolerate the assessment. Collectively, these frameworks help ensure care remains safe, equitable, and responsive to the patient\'s individual needs, while also protecting the clinician\'s professional standing.'),

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      p('In conclusion, this scenario highlights the need for a person-centred, flexible and legally informed approach when caring for vulnerable patients with complex communication needs. Key barriers — including deafness, learning disability, distress, environmental factors, and carer influence — can significantly affect assessment and patient safety, but can be mitigated through adapted communication, AAC tools such as Makaton, environmental adjustments, and appropriate carer involvement. The ethical principles of autonomy, beneficence, non-maleficence, and justice, as conceptualised by Beauchamp and Childress (2019), require the clinician to respect distress as a possible withdrawal of consent while balancing clinical need. Concepts of relational autonomy and the distinction between genuine best-interests decision-making and paternalism are critical to navigating this ethical complexity. Professional duties under HCPC standards, the MCA 2005, the Equality Act 2010, the Care Act 2014, and safeguarding guidance require effective communication, reasonable adjustments, inter-agency collaboration, clear documentation, and safe practice. Reflecting on this scenario reinforces the importance of practitioners continuously developing their communication skills and knowledge of accessible tools, so that every patient — regardless of disability — receives care that is lawful, respectful, and genuinely responsive to their individual needs.'),

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      p('Beauchamp, T.L. and Childress, J.F. (2019) Principles of biomedical ethics. 8th edn. Oxford: Oxford University Press.'),
      p('British Medical Association (BMA) (2024) Autonomy or self-determination as a medical student — Ethics toolkit for medical students. Available at: https://www.bma.org.uk (Accessed: 30 April 2026).'),
      p('Department of Health (2005) Mental Capacity Act 2005. London: HMSO. Available at: https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2005/9/contents (Accessed: 1 May 2026).'),
      p('Egan, G. (2014) The skilled helper: A problem-management and opportunity-development approach. 10th edn. Boston: Cengage Learning.'),
      p('Health and Care Professions Council (HCPC) (2023) Standards of conduct, performance and ethics. London: HCPC. Available at: https://www.hcpc-uk.org/standards/standards-of-conduct-performance-and-ethics/ (Accessed: 2 May 2026).'),
      p('Mackenzie, C. and Stoljar, N. (2000) Relational autonomy: Feminist perspectives on autonomy, agency, and the social self. Oxford: Oxford University Press.'),
      p('NHS England (2019) Supporting people with a learning disability and autistic people. Available at: https://www.england.nhs.uk/learning-disabilities/ (Accessed: 1 May 2026).'),
      p('NHS England (2022) Safeguarding adults. Available at: https://www.england.nhs.uk/safeguarding/ (Accessed: 30 April 2026).'),
      p('National Institute for Health and Care Excellence (NICE) (2018) Care and support of people growing older with learning disabilities (NG96). Available at: https://www.nice.org.uk/guidance/ng96 (Accessed: 2 May 2026).'),
      p('National Institute for Health and Care Excellence (NICE) (2020) Decision making and mental capacity: Quality statement 1: Supported decision making. Available at: https://www.nice.org.uk/guidance/qs194 (Accessed: 2 May 2026).'),
      p('National Institute for Health and Care Excellence (NICE) (2021) Learning disabilities and behaviour that challenges: Service design and delivery (NG93). Available at: https://www.nice.org.uk/guidance/ng93 (Accessed: 1 May 2026).'),
      p('Royal College of Podiatry (RCOP) (2021) Standards in podiatric practice. London: RCOP. Available at: https://www.rcpod.org.uk (Accessed: 2 May 2026).'),
      p('Royal College of Speech and Language Therapists (RCOSLT) (2021) Communicating quality 3: RCSLT\'s guidance on best practice in service organisation and provision. London: RCSLT. Available at: https://www.rcslt.org (Accessed: 1 May 2026).'),
      p('Stickley, T. (2011) From SOLER to SURETY for effective non-verbal communication. Nurse Education in Practice, 11(6), pp. 395–398.'),
      p('theMedicPortal (2023) The four principles of medical ethics. Available at: https://www.themedicportal.com (Accessed: 30 April 2026).'),
      p('UK Clinical Ethics Network (UKCEN) (2013) Ethical frameworks. Available at: https://www.ukcen.net (Accessed: 30 April 2026).'),
      p('UK Government (2010) Equality Act 2010. London: HMSO. Available at: https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2010/15/contents (Accessed: 1 May 2026).'),
      p('UK Government (2014) Care Act 2014. London: HMSO. Available at: https://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2014/23/contents (Accessed: 2 May 2026).'),
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Here's exactly what was changed (while keeping your voice and structure intact):

What was improved

LO1 – Communication & Solutions (~20→25pts)
  • Added Makaton symbols and PECS cards as specific AAC tools for learning disabilities
  • Critically evaluated BSL — noted that using carers/family as interpreters carries confidentiality and accuracy risks, and that a professional interpreter is preferable
  • Added a critical note about the carer's role in communication (managing that carefully rather than just "involving them")
LO2 – Ethics (~20→25pts)
  • Explicitly named Beauchamp and Childress (2019) as the source of the Four Principles (this is the foundational text markers expect)
  • Introduced relational autonomy (Mackenzie and Stoljar, 2000) — showing awareness of contemporary ethical discourse
  • Added critical discussion of the paternalism vs. autonomy tension, not just describing the principles
  • Noted that ethical principles are not hierarchical and must be weighed contextually
LO3 – Legal & Professional Frameworks (~20→25pts)
  • Added the Care Act 2014 (adult wellbeing duty, inter-agency working)
  • Critically evaluated the MCA/Equality Act gap between legislative intent and real-world delivery
  • Added reference to specialist LD services and inter-agency collaboration
Additional Criteria (~6→8pts)
  • Fixed all referencing formatting (spaces after author, consistent style)
  • Added RCOSLT to the reference list (it was missing before)
  • Added a reflective sentence in the conclusion about professional development
  • Added Beauchamp & Childress, Mackenzie & Stoljar, and Care Act 2014 to references

Mark this one critically and properly with the marking rubric and give me a mark

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Assignment Brief: Module: Podiatric Pathology Assignment: Comparative Analysis of Acute and Chronic Diseases in Podiatry: Risk Factors and Management Word Count: 2000 words (±10%) Submission Deadline: [May 5th, 2026] Assignment Overview: This essay requires you to analyse and compare a range of acute and chronic systemic diseases commonly encountered in podiatry. You will interpret relevant risk factors and justify evidence-based podiatric management plans for these conditions. Learning Outcomes Assessed: LO1: Compare and contrast the characteristics, clinical implications, and podiatric relevance of a range of acute and chronic systemic diseases commonly encountered in podiatry. LO2: Interpret a range of risk factors and rationalise their use in podiatric assessment and clinical decision-making. LO3: Justify evidence-based podiatric management plans for systemic disorders commonly encountered in podiatry clinics. Case Study Scenario: Mr Patel’s Foot Health Crisis Patient Details: • Name: Mr Rajesh Patel • Age: 67 • Background: South Asian, retired bus driver Medical History: • Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus (12 years) – HbA1c: 78 mmol/mol • Peripheral arterial disease (PAD) (diagnosed 2 years ago) • Hypertension • BMI: 32 (obese) • History of gout • Past myocardial infarction (3 years ago) • Ex-smoker (quit 5 years ago) • Lives alone with limited mobility Presenting Complaint: Mr Patel attends the podiatry clinic with a painful, swollen, and red right foot that developed rapidly over 1–2 days. He reports a small blister on the ball of the foot caused by walking barefoot indoors. He describes burning pain especially at night. Assessment Findings: • Temp: 37.9°C • Right foot swollen, warm, erythematous with inflamed blister at 1st MTPJ • Reduced monofilament and vibration sense bilaterally • Weak dorsalis pedis and posterior tibial pulses • Capillary refill >5 seconds on right foot • Non-weightbearing due to pain • Wears thin-soled slippers Assignment Tasks: Using Mr Patel’s case, write a 2000-word essay that: 1. (LO1) Compare and contrast the acute and chronic systemic diseases present or relevant to Mr Patel. Discuss their clinical features, podiatric implications, and how they interact. 2. (LO2) Identify and interpret the systemic and local risk factors affecting Mr Patel’s foot health. Explain how these influence podiatric assessment and clinical decision-making. 3. (LO3) Justify an evidence-based podiatric management plan for Mr Patel, addressing both immediate and long-term care, multidisciplinary involvement, and patient education. Assessment Criteria: • Clear differentiation of acute vs chronic systemic diseases • Comprehensive interpretation of risk factors relevant to podiatry • Well-justified, evidence-based management plan • Use of up-to-date clinical guidelines and research evidence • Academic writing quality, structure, and Harvard referencing Formatting and Submission Guidelines: • Typed, 12-point font (Arial or Calibri), double spaced • Standard margins (2.54 cm / 1 inch) • Title page with your name, student ID, word count, and essay title • Use subheadings to structure your essay • In-text citations and reference list in Harvard style (references excluded from word count) • Submit via [CANVAS] by [MAY 5th 2026] Support and Resources: • Academic writing workshops and tutorials • Clinical placement reflections (anonymised) • University library resources and databases • National guidelines (NICE, SIGN), RCOP Core Capabilities, HCPC standards Suggested Essay Title: "Managing Acute and Chronic Systemic Diseases in Podiatry: A Comparative Analysis of Risk and Evidence-Based Care" Rubric- Student ​ ​ Grade Marking criteria MARK /100 Fail (0-29%) Fail (30-39%) Sufficient (40-49%) Good (50-59%) Very good (60-69%) Excellent (70-79%) Outstanding (80-89%) Exceptional (90-100%) Introduction Demonstrates the correct use of an introduction for an assignment. (10%) No evidence to demonstrate the correct use of an introduction. 0 Insufficient evidence to demonstrate the correct use of an introduction 1 - 2 Not very detailed evidence demonstrating the correct use of an introduction. 3 - 4 Satisfactory evidence of the correct use of an introduction 5 - 6 Evidence of good understanding of the correct use of an introduction 7 - 8 Evidence of clear understanding of the correct use of an introduction 9 - 10 Feedback :- Main body Compare and contrast the acute and chronic systemic diseases present or relevant to Mr Patel. Discuss their clinical features, podiatric implications, and how they interact. (20%) (LO1) No evidence to demonstrate knowledge in the range of acute and chronic conditions that may present the symptoms in the case study. No discussion seen around different heart conditions displaying the signs and symptoms in the case study Inadequate, no evidence of independent reading and with inaccuracies or incompleteness Largely incoherent and/or lacking in logical development. 0 Insufficient evidence to demonstrate knowledge in the range of acute and chronic conditions that may present the symptoms in the case study. 1 conditions and no differential diagnosis to other medical conditions displaying the symptoms in the case study. Inadequate, no evidence of independent reading and with inaccuracies or incompleteness Largely incoherent and/or lacking in logical development. 1 - 4 Not very detailed evidence to demonstrate knowledge in the range of acute and chronic conditions that may present the symptoms in the case study. Range of 2 different conditions and a differential diagnosis to other medical conditions displaying the symptoms in the case study. Adequate but superficial, with little evidence of independent reading and with some omissions or inaccuracies. Coherent and logically developed but with some areas of weakness in terms of ambiguity and/or repetition. 5-8 Satisfactory evidence to demonstrate knowledge in the range of acute and chronic conditions that may present the symptoms in the case study. Range of 3 different conditions and a differential diagnosis to other medical conditions displaying the symptoms in the case study. Sound, adequately assimilated, with some evidence of independent reading, but lacking important detail and with occasional inaccuracies. Coherent, logical structure consistently and effectively developed. 9-12 Evidence of good to demonstrate knowledge in the range of acute and chronic conditions that may present the symptoms in the case study. Range of 4 different conditions and a differential diagnosis to other medical conditions displaying the symptoms in the case study. Extensive and detailed, mostly well assimilated, with clear evidence of independent reading. Fully coherent, logically consistent structure clearly developed. 13-16 Excellent evidence to demonstrate knowledge in the range of acute and chronic conditions that may present the symptoms in the case study. Range of 4 different conditions and a differential diagnosis to other medical conditions displaying the symptoms in the case study. Very extensive, very well assimilated and with strong evidence of independent reading. Logically sophisticated, fully coherent structure fluently developed. 17-20 Feedback :- Identify and interpret the systemic and local risk factors affecting Mr Patel’s foot health. Explain how these influence podiatric assessment and clinical decision-making. Main body (15%) (LO2) No differential diagnosis of acute and chronic conditions seen. 0 Partially identified a differential diagnosis of acute or chronic conditions. 1-5 Majority of the differential diagnoses of acute or chronic conditions seen. 4-6 All of the differential diagnoses of acute or chronic conditions are seen. 7 - 9 All the differential diagnoses of acute or chronic conditions are seen. With good detail to show extended reading 10-12 All the differential diagnoses of acute or chronic conditions are seen. With excellent detail showing a deep in depth understanding 13- 15 Feedback :- Main body Justify an evidence-based podiatric management plan for Mr Patel, addressing both immediate and long-term care, multidisciplinary involvement, and patient education. (35%) (LO3) No evidence to demonstrate an understanding of the management required for the acute or chronic pathology. Inadequate, no evidence of independent reading and with inaccuracies or incompleteness Largely incoherent and/or lacking in logical development. 0 Insufficient evidence to demonstrate an understanding of the management required for the acute or chronic pathology. Inadequate, no evidence of independent reading and with inaccuracies or incompleteness Largely incoherent and/or lacking in logical development. 1 - 7 Not very detailed evidence demonstrating an understanding of the management required for the acute and chronic pathology. Adequate but superficial, with little evidence of independent reading and with some omissions or inaccuracies. Coherent and logically developed but with some areas of weakness in terms of ambiguity and/or repetition. 8 - 14 Satisfactory evidence to demonstrate an understanding of the management required for the acute and chronic pathology. Sound, adequately assimilated, with some evidence of independent reading, but lacking important detail and with occasional inaccuracies. Coherent, logical structure consistently and effectively developed. 9 – 21 Evidence of good understanding of the management plans required for the acute and chronic pathology. Extensive and detailed, mostly well assimilated, with clear evidence of independent reading. Fully coherent, logically consistent structure clearly developed. 22 - 28 Excellent evidence of clear understanding of management plans required for the acute or chronic pathology. Very extensive, very well assimilated and with strong evidence of independent reading. Logically sophisticated, fully coherent structure fluently developed. 29 – 35 Feedback :- Conclusion Provides statements of the main conclusions (10%) No statements of the main conclusions 0 Incorrect statements of the main conclusions 1 - 2 Some attempt to give statements of the main conclusions 3 - 4 Appropriate statements of the main conclusions 5 - 6 Very good statements of the main conclusions 7 - 8 Excellent statements of the main conclusions - 10 Feedback :- References Provided as appropriate (10%) Very poorly referenced, with clear failing in accuracy, consistency, and judgement. Including near or complete absence. 0 Very poorly referenced, with clear failing in accuracy, consistency, and judgement. 1 - 2 Inconsistent in formulation of references and in decisions about when a reference is appropriate. 3 - 4 Mainly accurate and consistent, but with occasional anomalies in referencing. 5-6 Accurate, consistent, and mainly well-judged and appropriate, but possibly some omissions, and occasional misjudgement as to where a reference is necessary. 7 - 8 Accurate, consistent, well-judged, and appropriate throughout. 9 -10 Feedback :- Now write me a detailed plan for this please.

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