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| 1 | Data Analysis | SPP version 23 | SPSS version 23 | Spelling - software name misspelled |
| 2 | Introduction (Shaikh study) | "On third day" | "On the third day" | Grammar - missing definite article |
| 3 | Introduction (Shaikh study) | "flow rates are 24.00..." | "flow rates were 24.00..." | Grammar - tense inconsistency (past tense needed for reported results) |
| 4 | Introduction (Sachse Urethrotome) | "The Sachse Urethrotome**,** is" | Comma removed | Punctuation - erroneous comma between subject and verb |
| 5 | Data Analysis | "Post operative Qmax" | "Post-operative Qmax" | Punctuation - compound modifier requires a hyphen |
| 6 | Data Collection (legend note) | "foley catheter" | "Foley catheter" | Capitalisation - proper noun (brand/eponym) |
write down in text citation or references of operational definition
urethral stricture diagnosis uroflowmetry urethrography definition
urethral stricture EAU guidelines diagnosis management
uroflowmetry peak flow rate Qmax normal values measurement
obesity BMI 27.5 cutoff Asian population definition WHO
BMI cutoff Asian obesity 27.5 kg/m2
body mass index obesity Asian criteria WHO expert consultation
diabetes mellitus diagnostic criteria classification ADA WHO definition
hypertension definition diagnosis guidelines JNC blood pressure
smoking definition cigarettes per day smoker classification epidemiology
"Patients with urinary obstructive symptoms, urinary flow < 15 ml/sec on uroflowmetry and micturating cystourethrography showing narrowed urethral segment..."
...with absent or reduced contrast filling and proximal urethral dilatation will be labelled as having urethral stricture.^11,12^
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| 11 | Lumen N, Campos-Juanatey F, Greenwell T, Martins FE, Osman NI, Riechardt S. European Association of Urology guidelines on urethral stricture disease (Part 1): management of male urethral stricture disease. Eur Urol. 2021;80(2):190-200. (PMID: 34059397) |
| 12 | Angermeier KW, Rourke KF, Dubey D. SIU/ICUD Consultation on Urethral Strictures: evaluation and follow-up. Urology. 2014;83(3 Suppl):S8-17. (PMID: 24275285) |
Rationale: The EAU guidelines (ref 11) define urethral stricture and specify the diagnostic role of uroflowmetry (Qmax < 15 ml/s) and urethrography. The SIU/ICUD consultation (ref 12) defines evaluation criteria including MCUG/urethrography findings (proximal dilatation, reduced contrast filling).
"Urinary flow in ml/sec will be measured on uroflowmetry on enrollment and 30-days post-operatively."
...on enrollment and 30-days post-operatively.^11^
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| 11 | Lumen N et al. EAU guidelines on urethral stricture disease. Eur Urol. 2021;80(2):190-200. (PMID: 34059397) (same as above - no new reference needed) |
Rationale: The EAU guidelines define Qmax measurement by uroflowmetry as the primary functional outcome measure in urethral stricture management - the same reference (11) covers this definition.
"BMI ≥ 27.5 kg/m² will be taken as obese."
...A BMI of ≥ 27.5 kg/m² will be taken as obese.^13^
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| 13 | WHO Expert Consultation. Appropriate body-mass index for Asian populations and its implications for policy and intervention strategies. Lancet. 2004;363(9403):157-63. (PMID: 14726171) |
Rationale: The WHO Expert Consultation (2004) is the definitive source for the BMI ≥ 27.5 kg/m² cutoff for obesity in Asian/South Asian populations (including Pakistanis). This is the universally cited reference for this specific threshold.
"DM will be deemed positive if known case of diabetes mellitus on hypoglycemic therapy for ≥ 1-year - assessed on history and medical record."
...assessed on history and medical record.^14^
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| 14 | American Diabetes Association Professional Practice Committee. 2. Diagnosis and Classification of Diabetes: Standards of Care in Diabetes - 2024. Diabetes Care. 2024;47(Suppl 1):S20-42. (PMID: 38078589) |
Rationale: The ADA Standards of Care define DM and its classification, including the operational use of ongoing hypoglycemic therapy as confirmation of an established diagnosis - the standard reference used in Pakistani medical research and CPSP synopses.
"Current smoker who has smoked ≥ 10 cigarettes/day for two years will be labelled as smoker."
...for two years will be labelled as smoker.^15^
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| 15 | Benowitz NL, Bernert JT, Foulds J, Hecht SS, Jacob P, Jarvis MJ, et al. Biochemical verification of tobacco use and cessation. Nicotine Tob Res. 2020;22(7):1086-97. (PMID: 32056009) |
Rationale: This is the standard reference for defining and classifying smoker status based on quantity (cigarettes/day) and duration - widely used in clinical research and CPSP-approved synopsis formats in Pakistan.
"Hypertension will be deemed positive if known case of hypertension on antihypertensive therapy for ≥ 1-year - assessed on history and medical record."
...assessed on history and medical record.^16^
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| 16 | Unger T, Borghi C, Charchar F, Khan NA, Poulter NR, Prabhakaran D, et al. 2020 International Society of Hypertension Global Hypertension Practice Guidelines. Hypertension. 2020;75(6):1334-57. (PMID: 32370572) |
Rationale: The ISH 2020 Global Hypertension Guidelines define hypertension and operationalize it via established diagnosis on antihypertensive therapy - this is widely cited in Pakistani/South Asian clinical research synopses.
11. Lumen N, Campos-Juanatey F, Greenwell T, Martins FE, Osman NI,
Riechardt S. European Association of Urology guidelines on urethral
stricture disease (Part 1): management of male urethral stricture
disease. Eur Urol. 2021;80(2):190-200.
12. Angermeier KW, Rourke KF, Dubey D. SIU/ICUD Consultation on
Urethral Strictures: evaluation and follow-up. Urology.
2014;83(3 Suppl):S8-17.
13. WHO Expert Consultation. Appropriate body-mass index for Asian
populations and its implications for policy and intervention
strategies. Lancet. 2004;363(9403):157-63.
14. American Diabetes Association Professional Practice Committee.
2. Diagnosis and Classification of Diabetes: Standards of Care
in Diabetes – 2024. Diabetes Care. 2024;47(Suppl 1):S20-42.
15. Benowitz NL, Bernert JT, Foulds J, Hecht SS, Jacob P, Jarvis MJ,
et al. Biochemical verification of tobacco use and cessation.
Nicotine Tob Res. 2020;22(7):1086-97.
16. Unger T, Borghi C, Charchar F, Khan NA, Poulter NR, Prabhakaran D,
et al. 2020 International Society of Hypertension Global Hypertension
Practice Guidelines. Hypertension. 2020;75(6):1334-57.
| Definition | Superscript | Reference |
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| Urethral stricture | ^11,12^ | EAU Guidelines; SIU/ICUD Consultation |
| Peak urinary flow rate | ^11^ | EAU Guidelines (same) |
| Obesity (BMI ≥ 27.5) | ^13^ | WHO Expert Consultation, Lancet 2004 |
| Diabetes mellitus | ^14^ | ADA Standards of Care 2024 |
| Smoker | ^15^ | Benowitz et al., Nicotine Tob Res 2020 |
| Hypertension | ^16^ | ISH Global Guidelines 2020 |
Put in text references in harvard style andgive proper reference to add it in study reference section
Patients with urinary obstructive symptoms, urinary flow < 15 ml/sec on uroflowmetry and micturating cystourethrography showing narrowed urethral segment (abrupt change in urethral caliber) with absent or reduced contrast filling and proximal urethral dilatation will be labelled as having urethral stricture (Lumen et al., 2021; Angermeier, Rourke and Dubey, 2014).
Urinary flow in ml/sec will be measured on uroflowmetry on enrollment and 30-days post-operatively (Lumen et al., 2021).
Obesity will be assessed through body mass index (BMI). BMI will be calculated by formula - weight in kg/height in meter². Weight will be measured on a weighing scale and height on stadiometer. A BMI of ≥ 27.5 kg/m² will be taken as obese (WHO Expert Consultation, 2004).
DM will be deemed positive if known case of diabetes mellitus on hypoglycemic therapy for ≥ 1-year - assessed on history and medical record (American Diabetes Association, 2024).
Current smoker who has smoked ≥ 10 cigarettes/day for two years will be labelled as smoker (Benowitz et al., 2020).
Hypertension will be deemed positive if known case of hypertension on antihypertensive therapy for ≥ 1-year - assessed on history and medical record (Unger et al., 2020).
| Definition | In-Text (Harvard) | Reference Author(s) | Year |
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| Urethral stricture | (Lumen et al., 2021; Angermeier, Rourke and Dubey, 2014) | Lumen N et al. / Angermeier KW et al. | 2021 / 2014 |
| Peak urinary flow rate | (Lumen et al., 2021) | Lumen N et al. | 2021 |
| Obesity - BMI ≥ 27.5 | (WHO Expert Consultation, 2004) | WHO Expert Consultation | 2004 |
| Diabetes mellitus | (American Diabetes Association, 2024) | ADA Professional Practice Committee | 2024 |
| Smoker | (Benowitz et al., 2020) | Benowitz NL et al. | 2020 |
| Hypertension | (Unger et al., 2020) | Unger T et al. | 2020 |
Note: Harvard style uses (Author, Year) in-text and full details in the reference list, ordered alphabetically by first author surname. Your reference list should merge these 6 new entries alphabetically with your existing 10 numbered references - or list them as a separate subsection titled "References for Operational Definitions" if your institute requires separation.