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Lei: [29/07/26, 06:36:15] Nay: I texted you because I don’t know if you know that from our next academic year my group won’t be there and we’ve chosen different groups [29/07/26, 06:36:35] Nay: Three of us are in your next from third semester onwards [29/07/26, 06:36:49] Nay: I, Devapriya and Deya [29/07/26, 06:37:24] Nay: And I only know you from that group since you know we have talked each other and also since you are the chief [29/07/26, 06:37:36] Nay: I only know you personally Sto cercando a imparare ad essere carina a scrivere e rispettosa. Gentile e le persone vorrei che si sentissero libere a parlare con me. Cosa rispondere Yes, I heard about it, I only thought that it wasn’t sure till the year began. About the girls I know them.

Ecco alcune opzioni per rispondere in modo caldo, aperto e rispettoso:
Opzione 1 - Semplice e cordiale:
"Yes, I heard about it! I'm really glad you reached out to let me know personally. It's nice that you, Devapriya and Deya will still be around from third semester - I'm sure we'll get along just fine. Feel free to come to me anytime if you need anything!"
Opzione 2 - Più personale e incoraggiante:
"Yes, I had heard something about it, but I wasn't sure until now! Thank you for taking the time to tell me directly - I really appreciate that. I know Devapriya and Deya too, so I'm happy the three of you will be joining. My door is always open, so don't hesitate to reach out whenever you need!"
Opzione 3 - Breve e genuina:
"Yes, I heard! Thanks for letting me know, Nay. I know the girls too, so it'll be nice working with all three of you. Please never hesitate to talk to me anytime - I'm always here!"
Perché funzionano queste risposte:
  • "Thank you for reaching out" - fa sentire la persona apprezzata per il gesto
  • "Feel free / don't hesitate" - invito esplicito a mantenere la comunicazione aperta
  • "My door is always open" - trasmette disponibilità senza essere formale
  • Confermare che conosci già le ragazze crea continuità e calore
  • Tono diretto ma gentile, senza essere eccessivamente formale
La chiave è ricambiare il gesto (lei ha fatto lo sforzo di avvisarti personalmente) e lasciare la porta aperta per future conversazioni.

Ultima Parte meno sdolcinata

"Yes, I heard! Thanks for letting me know, Nay. I know the girls too, so it'll be good having you three around. Talk to me whenever you need."
Cosa cambia:
  • "it'll be nice" → "it'll be good" - meno dolciastro
  • Tolto "I'm always here" - suonava un po' eccessivo
  • "Talk to me whenever you need" - diretto, aperto, senza sembrare troppo disponibile

Yes I heard about it but I wasn’t sure until now! Thanks for letting me know Nay. I know Devapriya and Deya too, so I’m happy the three of you will be joining. Feel free to write to me anytime if you need anything. Aggiungi che le aggiungo al nostro gruppo di classe.

"Yes I heard about it but I wasn't sure until now! Thanks for letting me know Nay. I know Devapriya and Deya too, so I'm happy the three of you will be joining. I'll add you all to our class group. Feel free to write to me anytime if you need anything."

Aggiungi che non ho il numero delle altre ragazze e quando ha tempo (scherzosamente solo quando ne ha perché all’ospedale è molto Impegnativo)

"Yes I heard about it but I wasn't sure until now! Thanks for letting me know Nay. I know Devapriya and Deya too, so I'm happy the three of you will be joining. I'll add you all to our class group - I don't have the other girls' numbers though, so send them over whenever you get a chance (no rush, I know hospital life doesn't leave much breathing room 😄). Feel free to write to me anytime if you need anything."

O che può aggiungerle lei

"Yes I heard about it but I wasn't sure until now! Thanks for letting me know Nay. I know Devapriya and Deya too, so I'm happy the three of you will be joining. I'll add you to our class group - or if it's easier, you can add the girls yourself whenever you get a chance (no rush, I know hospital life doesn't leave much breathing room 😄). Feel free to write to me anytime if you need anything."

Altra battuta

Alcune alternative alla battuta sull'ospedale:
  1. (no rush, I know between patients and professors there's not exactly free time to spare 😄)
  2. (whenever you survive the next shift 😄)
  3. (I know hospital schedules are no joke 😄)
Quale ti piace di più?

Feel free….troppo?

Sì, un po'. Alternatives più naturali:
  1. "Write to me anytime if you need anything."
  2. "You know where to find me if you need anything."
  3. Toglierla del tutto - il messaggio è già abbastanza aperto e caldo senza.
Considerando che lei ha già detto che ti conosce e si fida di te, la numero 2 dà un senso di familiarità senza sembrare troppo formale o sdolcinato.

Battuta diversa. Più semplice

  1. (whenever you get a minute between patients 😄)
  2. (when you come up for air 😄)
  3. (no rush, hospital first 😄)

Meglio. Considerando come voglio scrivere Hi guys! So, as someone of you knew on of the group 55 was divided between the other groups. Theee girls, Nay, Devaprya and Deya came to our class.

Considerando il tuo stile, direi (whenever you get a minute between patients 😄) - è semplice, diretta e si capisce subito il riferimento senza esagerare.
Ora per il messaggio al gruppo, corretto e rifinito:
"Hi guys! So, as some of you may know, group 55 was divided between the other groups. Three girls - Nay, Devapriya and Deya - are joining our class. Welcome! 🎉"
Correzioni fatte:
  • "someone of you knew" → "some of you may know"
  • "on of the group" → "group 55"
  • "Theee" → "Three"
  • "came to our class" → "are joining our class" (più naturale)
  • Aggiunto welcome finale - appropriato per un gruppo classe, non è sdolcinato

Più sincero. Welcome no

"Hi guys! So, as some of you may know, group 55 got divided between the other groups. Nay, Devapriya and Deya will be joining us from third semester. Glad to have them with us! 😊"

Più semplice

"Hi guys! Group 55 got divided and Nay, Devapriya and Deya will be joining us from third semester. 😊"

Soo Welcome 😊

"Hi guys! Group 55 got divided and Nay, Devapriya and Deya will be joining us from third semester. Soo welcome 😊"
Funziona - il "Soo" lo rende informale e genuino, non forzato.
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